Tuesday, August 21, 2012

New Story Excerpt -- The Fall


It happened without warning. 

One moment a woman pushing her baby stroller was smiling at her friend walking beside her, the next they both lay on the cement as a car heading straight for them sped up with no intention of slowing down. A red-headed man talking on his cell phone collapsed, and without another word he lied still. A young girl two paces ahead of me fell face-first into the pavement. A motorcycle zipped through the intersection and crashed through the store-front window.
                
 This all happened mid-sip of my mocha. The coffee scalded my tongue as it sat in my mouth for too long, unable to swallow out of paralysis of the events conspiring around me. It was as though everyone was controlled by a hypnotist and he had snapped his fingers, bringing everyone into a deep sleep.
               
 Everyone but me.
               
 The sound of a plane whistled in the sky above me, and I looked up to see the metallic figure ripping through the air at speeds almost incapable of following. A stream of clouds trailed the bottom, and it was then I realized the plane was emitting something. Smoke? Was it about to crash? The smoke – or whatever it was – fell like snow to the ground.

I looked left. Then right. Again, both ways, then behind and ahead.  Something was wrong. Horribly, horribly wrong. 

I tried to deny it at first, but then panic set in.

I dropped my coffee and I ran.

I needed to know if there were others, others like me that were panicking and running. To where, I had no idea, but somewhere, anywhere but here. But each body I passed was proof, another piece to the puzzle to verify that what I had just witnessed was real and not a dream.

I turned down an alley, leaned against a worn brick building and, for the first time in three years since my father died, cried.

I did not hear anyone approach until a hand grabbed my peacoat’s collar and pulled me from the ground. He was older than I, mid-twenties perhaps, short raven hair that matched his plain black t-shirt tucked fittingly into his black cargo pants. So much black, I could have mistaken him for Death. I did not know how accurate that comparison was until later.

 The man brought his wristwatch up to his mouth. He said into it, “Found one. Male. Late teen, early adult.”

The watch responded with a drawl, “Bring him in.”

 That was all that needed to be said. “You’re coming with me.” He grabbed my arm, holding it tightly as though he wished to snap either my radius or ulna in two.

“Hey, let me go!” The pain ran up my arm and into the whole of my body.
“You need to come with us for your own protection.”

“I’ll go! You don’t have to drag me!”

He didn’t respond, nor did he let go.

I heard screams.

As we turned the corner, there were other men like this guy – all dressed in black from head to toe – dragging others like myself past piles of bodies. Some were hysterical, the sudden deaths of those around them causing them to lose it all. I only just realized how almost completely sane I was. A vehicle that looked almost like a tank by design but without the turret and gun sat in the middle of the street, the track it used for movement carelessly crushing corpses. A large door leading into the back of the vehicle slammed down to reveal others in chains. The light blinded them for a moment, and then they madly tried to break the restraints that held them in place.

Protection never looked so frightening.

And if this was protection, then I did not want to be protected.

I heard an odd zipping noise. My arm no longer felt crushed, and the man holding me suddenly slumped to the ground. Red liquid that could only be blood oozed from an unexpected hole in his neck.
               
 “If you want to live, I’d come this way.”
               
 My instinct guided my sight back into the alley, and a man with earth-colored but graying hair motioned for me with his fingers. In one of his hands was a handgun.
               
 If there was one thing I had ever learned from television – state approved television, that is – it is to never say “no” to a man with a gun.

Break

Sorry, everyone. I've been a bad blog poster for ... well, since ever. I'll be posting something in the next 10 seconds though I have just started to work on. I was going to use it for NaNoWriMo, but I got too anxious and just started it anyway. I'm sure something else will come up for NaNoWriMo, or I'll just use the cheater's way and continue with this story or another for it.

I know; I'm so bad.